Thursday, September 24, 2020

Focus on language techniques

 I have shared a Sigma glossary of literary terms with you (copyrighted, so not linked on this public blog -  I do have the licence to share it with each of you though).


Here are some more resources - these ones will give you some new options to show off with at Level two!

Matrix Education Literary Techniques Toolkit


BBC Bite size revision language techniques


In groups today, I will give each of you a topic.  You need to develop a piece of writing or drama which uses at least five language techniques, including one new one that I will give you with the instructions.  Have fun!

Thursday, September 10, 2020

Greta Thunberg speech analysis

 ENL212 students - you have a printed copy of the speech transcript, plus you have a write-on copy of the questions in your ENL212 folders on google drive.


Greta Thunberg speech analysis - unfamiliar text practice

Your big question is: analyse how Thunberg develops a sense of urgency about climate action.
To prepare to answer this question, plan out answers to the following questions:
  1. What is Thunberg’s key message to her audience?
  2. What language choices does Thunberg make at the opening of her speech which shows her sense of power and links her to young people throughout the world?
  3. Find examples of the following language features/techniques and for each one, explain what it emphasises or develops: parallel structure, alliteration, second person narrative, statistics, rhetorical question, threat, emotional appeal.
  4. How does Thunberg finish her speech to maximise the sense of power of young people in the climate action challenge?

Once you have notes on the four questions above, you will be ready to write 3-4 paragraphs answering the main question: analyse how Thunberg develops a sense of urgency about climate action.

Climate activist Greta Thunberg, 16, addressed the U.N.'s Climate Action Summit in New York City on Monday. Here's the full transcript of Thunberg's speech, beginning with her response to a question about the message she has for world leaders.

My message is that we'll be watching you. This is all wrong. I shouldn't be up here. I should be back in school on the other side of the ocean. Yet you all come to us young people for hope. How dare you!

You have stolen my dreams and my childhood with your empty words. And yet I'm one of the lucky ones. People are suffering. People are dying. Entire ecosystems are collapsing. We are in the beginning of a mass extinction, and all you can talk about is money and fairy tales of eternal economic growth. How dare you!

For more than 30 years, the science has been crystal clear. How dare you continue to look away and come here saying that you're doing enough, when the politics and solutions needed are still nowhere in sight. You say you hear us and that you understand the urgency. But no matter how sad and angry I am, I do not want to believe that. Because if you really understood the situation and still kept on failing to act, then you would be evil. And that I refuse to believe.

The popular idea of cutting our emissions in half in 10 years only gives us a 50% chance of staying below 1.5 degrees [Celsius], and the risk of setting off irreversible chain reactions beyond human control. Fifty percent may be acceptable to you. But those numbers do not include tipping points, most feedback loops, additional warming hidden by toxic air pollution or the aspects of equity and climate justice. They also rely on my generation sucking hundreds of billions of tons of your CO2 out of the air with technologies that barely exist.

So a 50% risk is simply not acceptable to us — we who have to live with the consequences.
To have a 67% chance of staying below a 1.5 degrees global temperature rise – the best odds given by the [Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change] – the world had 420 gigatons of CO2 left to emit back on Jan. 1st, 2018. Today that figure is already down to less than 350 gigatons.

How dare you pretend that this can be solved with just 'business as usual' and some technical solutions? With today's emissions levels, that remaining CO2 budget will be entirely gone within less than 8 1/2 years. There will not be any solutions or plans presented in line with these figures here today, because these numbers are too uncomfortable. And you are still not mature enough to tell it like it is.

You are failing us. But the young people are starting to understand your betrayal. The eyes of all future generations are upon you. And if you choose to fail us, I say: We will never forgive you. We will not let you get away with this. Right here, right now is where we draw the line. The world is waking up. And change is coming, whether you like it or not.

Thank you.
 

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